nice - very original!
Thats a realy great song. Very funny and cool in the same time.
I've watched some of your previous songs. You got 0's where you deserved at least a 3. I think you're finaly getting it it with this song.
You gota grab the listeners attention right away. Most newgroundites have short attention spans. If you dont give the a reason to listen in the first 5-10 seconds your song is wasted.